
beta readers
Welcome, Reader.
You’ve found your way here for a reason.
Maybe it was curiosity. Maybe fate. Maybe a spark in the story that made you want to see more.
Whatever brought you here, I’m glad it did.
This is where I open the door just a little wider—offering you a chance to step into my world before anyone else. To read the words before they’re polished and perfect. To help shape what they’ll become.
If you're here to sign up as a beta reader, know this:
Your thoughts matter. Your honesty is valued. And your presence is deeply appreciated.
Thank you for being part of this chapter.
wanted
honest
feedback
I’m not afraid of the truth. If something feels off—whether it’s a plot hole, a slow chapter, or a character decision that doesn’t make sense, I want to hear about it. Be kind, but be real.
emotional reactions
Tell me how the story made you feel. Did a scene make you cry, laugh, rage, or gasp out loud? I live for those moments—and knowing where they hit (or miss) helps shape the heart of the story.
clarity & flow
If a section felt confusing, jarring, or hard to follow, flag it. I want to know where the pacing drags or where transitions need work. Your gut reactions help me refine the story’s rhythm.
what you should know
Content Warnings:
This story contains mature themes, including violence, addiction, trauma, emotional manipulation, and strong language. There are scenes of psychological intensity and moments that may be distressing for some readers. Please take care of yourself, and only continue if you're comfortable engaging with this kind of content.
This Is a Draft:
What you’ll be reading is not a polished final version. There may be typos, awkward phrasing, or uneven pacing. That’s exactly why I need your feedback—to help me catch what I can’t see. The bones are strong, but the structure is still being refined.
Not the Right Fit If…
If you’re looking for a clean, traditional romance, or prefer stories without grit, grey morality, or flawed characters, this might not be for you. And if you’re uncomfortable giving honest feedback (kind but direct), then this probably isn’t the right reading experience for you either.
WHO THIS IS FOR
If you love gritty dystopian worlds with layered characters and emotional stakes…
If you crave slow-burn tension, enemies-to-reluctant-allies, complicated power dynamics, and characters who are a little broken but trying…
If you’re drawn to stories where trust is earned, not given, and intimacy is messy, powerful, and hard-won…
If you want a female lead who isn’t soft or sweet or safe—and a male lead who wants to save her, but ends up falling for her…
Then this is for you.
Come in.
Stay awhile.
Tell me everything.
IF THIS IS YOU, PLEASE FILL IN THE DETAILS BELOW
By signing up as a beta reader, you agree to the following:
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You will not share, reproduce, distribute, or claim ownership of any part of the manuscript.
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You understand this is an unpublished draft, and all content is protected under copyright law.
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You are here to provide honest, constructive feedback—not to critique spelling or grammar unless asked.
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You will respect the author’s time, effort, and vulnerability in sharing this work with you.
Failure to respect these terms may result in immediate removal from the beta program.
Let’s keep this a safe, creative, and supportive space.